Monday 20 June 2016

The man



There were four young friends out camping in a forest in the middle of nowhere, there names were Jack, Keira, Luke and Chris. Chris had come up with the idea to go camping out in the forest he said he had been camping out in the forest before. They were all got out of the car and started walking towards where they were going to stay and put up the tent, when they were walking they thought that they heard noises between the trees. Jack decided to venture out to where the noise was coming from, he walk through the trees then saw a pathway that lead to where the noise was coming from. At the end of the pathway Jack saw a figure of a person in the dark, the figure started walking towards Jack and Jack ran as fast as he could to get to where they were all going to set up the tent.

When Jack got to where they were going to set up camp he told everyone that he had saw someone else in the forest. “It's probably just another person camping out in the forest” Chris said to Jack “hopefully” Jack replied. The sun started to fade away and the bright moon started to come out, “we better start getting reading to go to sleep” said Chris “yeah” they all agreed. They all got out their sleeping bags and put them all inside the tent. Luke zipped up the front and then everyone got into their sleeping bags to go to sleep and get ready for the next day.

In the middle of the night Jack heard a chainsaw rumbling outside of their tent. “Guys there's someone outside of our tent with a chainsaw” Jack said to the others, “it's probably just someone getting firewood for a fire, go back to sleep” said Luke, “who would be cutting down trees in the middle of the night?” Questioned Jack “just don’t worry about it this place is safe” said Chris. Then the rumbling stopped and they thought the Pearson had gone, but then they heard a woman scream from a distance. “OK what was that?” questioned luke then the they heard a man walking towards the tent crushing all the leaves on the path, then they heard the man breathing outside of the tent. Then the rumbling started again  they all stayed as quiet as they could, they were all scared out of their minds and they didn’t know what to do.

The rumbling of the chainsaw started to get more distance and they unzipped the front and had a look outside and all they could see was fog so they started to walk  around to see if the person was there “OK this is way too creeping!” said Keira in fear shaking, “yeah we should get out of here” said Jack also in fear. “What about our stuff?” Questioned Luke “who cares about our stuff I care about my life!” said Keira “Fine we'll leave our stuff but we'll take the torch so we can see, our night vision goggles just in case and some food and water” said Chris. So they put the stuff in a backpack and started to leave. “Lets get to where we parked the car” Chris said to everyone.

While they were walking they heard some noises between the trees like birds chirping and wolves howling at the moon. No one could barely see any in the thick fog it was black as the night sky. Out of nowhere they heard someone walking between the trees stomping on the leaves making lots of noise. They tried shining the torch where the noise was coming from but it wasn’t bright enough, “I’ll look through the night vision goggles” Luke said and when he looked through them he saw a man crouching in the dark with a chainsaw looking at them. “We should go” Luke said to the others, “then let's go!” Keira said more terrified than before running away. So they all started running hopping the man would catch up to them.

“I hope you know where you are going Chris!” Jack said “I do! Well I think so anyway” Just as they took a corner they saw where they parked the car “see I knew where we were going!” Chris said “let's just get in the car!” Keira said running to the car. But then the man with the chainsaw jumped in front of the car so no one would be able to get to it. “You will never leave this place” said the man and he started up his chainsaw and started walking toward the children. “What are we going to do?!” ask Jack “uh… RUN!” said Chris The man swung his chainsaw at the children but they just jumped out of the way in time.

“Try and get to the car” said Chris So they were all trying to get to the car but the man was blocking their way. “Let's try and go around the back” said Luke to Keira. They went around the back and surprising got to the car but Jack and Chris were still outside. Keira thought she had to do something so she opened the door a bit and got out a giant rock and threw it at the man's head. The man looked at keira and look angry, but Jack and Chris took that chance and ran to the car and jumped in. Chris got into the driver's seat and drove as fast as he could, the man tried to run after the kids but he could keep up.



“That was terrifying I thought that that we weren't going to make it out alive!” Keira said shocked “I’m glad we did” said Jack Also in shocked. “I’m never going to go camping again, what if someone else is out in the forests?!” said Luke “me ever, “I think I am going to camp outside of my house next time” said Chris “that would be better” said Keira. They never talked about what happened that night again and they never told anyone what happened and people still go out to the forest to camp and they never come out. 

THE END by Jessica

3 comments:

  1. hi jess I gust read it and i is amazing its so fab

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  2. Hi Jess,
    i liked your story but next time i think you could maby add the main points about the story and then miss out the other stuff but i liked your story it was great :)

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  3. Hi Jess,
    i liked your story but next time i think you could maby add the main points about the story and then miss out the other stuff but i liked your story it was great :)

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