Tuesday 7 November 2017

Music is more important than sports

Music is more important than sports

I believe that music is more important than sports. Music can create a huge impact around the world. What you feel while writing music is what people will feel when listening to your music, it is amazing what you can create only using words. Music gives you more chances in life to become success and give a steady career. For example you get enter music contests and that could already be the start of your success. You just to give all you effort, as well as in sports.

Firstly think about what you could do when writing music. When writing music you can express your emotions through the words you write. Unlike music, when playing sports it can be difficult to express any emotions through sports. If you are feeling depressed while writing your song, your music will feel more gloomy. If you are more excited your song will feel more joyous. You might not even realize what you are writing in songs is expressing how you feel. Music can help you let loose and write down everything down and turn it into something amazing.

Furthermore in the music business you have far more opportunities than sports. Music gives you the chance to enter singing contests, like the voice. That could be the start of your career. Music also gives you the chance to get recognized around the world. In the future you could become on of the most famous song writers. Sports does also give you the chance to have a successful career, but you might not get as recognized as a songwriter. Unlike sports with music you don’t have to stick with on type of music. In sports you stay with one type of sports, e.g sports, tennis, soccer.

You must consider in sports you also get more exercise than songwriting, sports can give you a more healthier lifestyle than songwriting. But you can’t stay as a sports player forever. Most sports players retire around their 30’s and 40’s, depending on the sports. Most sports are quite active which makes it harder to play in the future. Which also causes you to get hurt easier When making music you can keep making music when you're old and gray. Music dosen’t require and physical activity, which makes it easier to play when you're older. Around the world music people in their seventies are still making music, though it might not be as modern, they are still making music

In conclusion I believe that music is more important than sports. There is so many more opportunities you get while doing music and you can still carry on doing music when your old, unlike sports. There is so much you can create doing music, which also affects other people. There's far more people in the world that gets recognized for music than sports. It is endless what you can create with music, you just have to use your imagination.

By Jessica

1 comment:

  1. Hello Jessica, im Malia from Kawakawa Primary. I like all your reasons for why music is more important than sports and I definitely agree with you, music is much more important. Your great at writing, and you can add so much information into one paragraph. Keep writing things like this!
    Come check out my blog http://kpsmaliad.blogspot.co.nz/
    Happy blogging!

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